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Long ago, in a town known now as Riverview, the founding families fought for there land…
“Take cover!” I yelled as the enemy through a bomb.
We ran for our lives as the bomb blew up, it seemed as if everyone survived. The smoke vanished and the rain put out the fire we looked down at the destruction the bomb had made. I heard a member of our own scream, a closer inspection showed why. Tears fell from my eyes, the enemy had done the impossible – They had killed our very best man.
It was clear to those who were defending the land that they had lost today’s battle and they retreated. They mourned the lost of there beloved, rage burned inside each and every one of them. A small ceremony was held right there – right then, the place he was buried was blessed and was marked a sacred place.
It was early in the morning or late in the night, we could not be sure – But we were sure that with this rage inside of us, we would win the war today.
“Sergent! Behind you!” screeched a mans voice. I swiftly turned around and in one quick movement I killed one of the enemies men.
“Today, we shall rise. Today, we shall win. Today, we shall avenge!” I yelled, our men cheered and we made our way into enemy territory.
They fought with all there strength, they killed anyone who dared to attack them. The war was brutal and many men died – The enemy had killed everyone, everyone except the sacred ones son. The boy of the one who was the best was a weakling – this was well known through out the many lands of QwertiSim, but he was mad, and had a rage inside him that no other man did, the spirit of his father was inside him and so that boy killed the leader of the enemy and claimed the land, he named it after his families name. Riverview.
The boy returned with the head of the enemies in hand and nothing else. The wives and children of the men who had died shared a moment of silence, all of them envied the mother who was the only one to have someone return.
“I name this land. Riverview – after my father, and family,” The boy said – and it was in that moment he became a man – the ruler of such a land.
“All hail our new King,” his mother said, “Kneel in his presence,”
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Well there you have it - the first chapter/intro of my blog story.
Incase you are wondering why I did not have photos - It's because what I was picturing in my head the sims wouldn't alow me to do, so it seemed easier to forget about the photos - I am debating wether or not I should take photos for this story.
Also incase you were confused, anything in italtics was in first person of a guy who lead men into war, anything that wasn't in italics was well me telling the story.
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